Logic Against The World
Logic Against The World
Who Got The Flav
You Ready, B?
Boat Tipping
Only Christopher We Acknowledge
No Shark Biters
PRhyme’s State Of Mind
It’s Time To Show You
Florida Boy
Coming To The Stage
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg