Saturday Night HOV
Saturday Night HOV
20/20 Vison
For Willy
Never Sober
Don’t Come To L.A.
Slurp. Sip. Repeat.
When So Much Turns To Too Much
Billboard Moves
Look Where We At
Home Of The Brave
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg