No Facetime On A Weekday
No Facetime On A Weekday
I Invented The Curve
More Drinks
Never Ending Story
Pull It
Ain’t On My Throne
Next!
Look At Me Now
Hail To My Favorite Lady
Mumple Rappers Ain’t Paying Dues
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg