Sparks In The Dark.
Sparks In The Dark.
Apple Jacks.
All Tied Up.
Thriller.
Breathe Easy.
Welcome Home Ace.
Pucker Up.
Money Ain’t A Thang.
Fucking Hos. Doing Shows.
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg