Aubreezy
Aubreezy
Go shorty, it’s your birthday.
From nothing to King.
When the darkness comes, P will brighten it up.
Do it all night with the remix.
Meow.
Lords back.
It’s chaining day.
Angels to the rescue
Pull up.
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg