Who’s Free?
Who’s Free?
How Many You Say?
Just Hit A Mill
Only Built 4 Cuban Cigars
Black & Yellow With The Pedal
Queen’s Lurking
Want It, They Got It.
Been On That
Hey Girl!
Dreamin’ For Your Touching
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg