That Just Don’t Feel Right
That Just Don’t Feel Right
Again
Victory Is Sweet
Low Flow
Don’t Shoot
At All…At All
Omelly & Philly
We Are
Daddy Catch
Sauclelujah!
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg