You Know You Fucked Up Right?
You Know You Fucked Up Right?
The Champ Is Here
Call Me
Taught By Ali
Shotta
Drip
Don’t Need No Tune Up
Watch Your Step
Feeling It
Make Me Broad Day ‘Em
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg