Like Asteroids We Ballin
Like Asteroids We Ballin
There’s The Uproar
Get Down or Lay Down
Everybody Wear Red
Loving Ya Movement
Pres For Pres
Benny Pesci
Your Hoods, The God’s Bail.
Term’s On Top
What They Gon’ Say Now?
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg