Might Not Make It
Might Not Make It
Go Crazy
Vegas Starts Here
Sosa, Bitch I’m Big Homie
What’s The Science, Baby
Screw Up
Taylor In Da Front
Brand Name
New Me
I’m Only Human
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg