Let Us Pray
Let Us Pray
And You Say New York City
Konichiwa, Bitches
Welcome Bak
Nice Try
Side Eye
Mighty Fine Days
It’s Smoke Time!
Going Up?
Strange New Addictions
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg