Trouble Don’t Last Always
Trouble Don’t Last Always
The Saga Continues
Keep It Coming ‘Til I’m Throwing Up
Make It Kick Rocks
The Light Of Things
Money Trees
I Apologize
We Live In Brooklyn, Baby.
Raised The Icon Ceiling
Bags Double Sized
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg