Not Mine
Not Mine
Count It Up
New Date Alert
Watching You!
Pen Mightier Than The Sword
Owww
Grimiest Of All Time
More Focused
Family Affair
Clap Back Like Try Me Now
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg