Fuck All The Hating
Fuck All The Hating
Doing Lil Wrong To Do A Lil Right
Hell Is Cheap, But Expensive Though
Patience Is Wearing Thin
Did What? With You Know Who?
Bounce Back, Roll On It.
Ayyy
Dapper Don
No Complaints
Nice Shot
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg