Still Standing
Still Standing
She A Star
Three’s A Charm
Cigar Dreams
Bricks Like Chapo
Hey Baby, Your Hips Getting Big
Sipping Roca Patron
Business Man
Bounce!
Woo!
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg