Nobody Praying For Me
Nobody Praying For Me
…Okay
Not Phony
Trill Figer
Somebody Please Call Ri Ri
I Hear The Blogs
Another One
Let The Story Begin…
Real Bad Man
More Trouble
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg