Pound After Pound.
Pound After Pound.
Who You Wanna Be.
Two Cups Please.
The PARTY’s All His.
No Tags.
*YN Laugh*
Gotta Be Right.
We Live In Brooklyn Baby.
Grocery Shopping.
Mood.
This excerpt does an excellent job of balancing mystery with character development. Sarah’s transformation feels believable and unsettling at the same time, and Nico’s internal struggle adds emotional realism. The fact that she forgets both trivial details and life-altering events shows how completely her past has been erased. I love how the story hints that the truth is still buried beneath the surface, creating a sense that the past will inevitably resurface, no matter how much is forgotten. tvg